SpleenMage's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lollipop Envy]

Oh god D:

Why do I feel dirty after watching small children eat candy...

... but yeah, the style is kind of rough. Could use some backgrounds. Also it would be better if you faded the auido at the end, it just kind of cuts out, makes it sound pretty awful.

Other than that nice animation. It has a plot and ends it. Better than alot of shit in the Portal right now. Looking forward to seeing improvement!

Ddiddily responds:

Thanks, I wish I faded the audio at the end, it does sound bad the way it just cuts out.

[Brush your Teeth! 2]

Meh

I saw your first one and I have to say that it was better than this. You shouldve kept the original sketchy style. The only thing that made me laugh a little was the random 'Heil Hitler' thing.

Just keep with the original style. Good luck :D

Prancibald90 responds:

i switched style cos the original one was made using the koolmoves program this one was made using flash...